Portions of text "blacked out" that are revealed as the protagonist gains his trust.
đź’ˇ By contrasting his rigid military discipline with his internal turmoil, you make the General a much more magnetic and complex "villain" or love interest. Bound to the General by Selina Storm
In Bound to the General , the tension hinges on the power imbalance and the high stakes of a military or dystopian setting. A feature that would deepen the reader's immersion and the characters' connection is 🖋️ The Feature: The General’s Ledger Portions of text "blacked out" that are revealed
Side-bar notes showing the General's true intentions for a mission. A feature that would deepen the reader's immersion
This is an interactive, "living" document or hidden epistolary element within the story that tracks the General’s private observations versus his public commands.
Start each chapter with a brief, cold military log entry.
If you tell me more about the specific or the protagonist's personality , I can tailor the ledger entries to fit your story’s tone.