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I see the couples passing by, holding onto something I can’t seem to grasp, feeling like I’m in a coma while the world spins without me. The truth hurts, and I’ve learned the hard way that you can’t trust the mirages on the desert road. It makes you want to close the door on your good side—it only ever got me hurt anyway.

But maybe I’ll keep moving, looking for that quiet spot where the pain doesn't catch up, trying to find a home in a place that has none left to give. No more, no more, cruel world. I'm taking my memories and I'm moving on.

The neon lights are buzzing, but they don't light up the dark, just show the dust settling on a broken heart. It’s a fast-paced blur out there, and I’ve been running in the wrong direction for too long, letting this harsh old world take its toll.

What are you going for (e.g., poetic/melancholy, angry/desperate, or nostalgic)? Holly Humberstone – Cruel World Lyrics - Genius