Slammed

Aim for "Shazam" in your writing by being lean and impactful. This avoids reader fatigue and ensures your point is understood quickly. 2. Describing Physical Action

Avoid a "cookbook" style (e.g., "He did A. Then B happened.") by weaving in the character’s thoughts and feelings during the action. Slammed

Use the action of slamming to convey emotion without explicit dialogue. A character slamming a door behind them can replace an unnecessary "he said angrily". Aim for "Shazam" in your writing by being lean and impactful

Use the The Writing Practice to turn criticism into a living document for improvement. To Anyone Who's Been Slammed by a Writing Teacher Slammed

If your writing has been "slammed" by a teacher or peer, it is important to separate the critique from your identity as a writer.